To be able to predict the end of an adventure story by shay and sam

The three men were saying a secret and     whispering with Ben and Robyn overhearing them. Amazingly the three men heard them trying to get away in the bushy woods. The three men saw some people running and said “AFTER THEM! Shouting the three men. Ben distracted the men but as quick as a flash Robyn was following ben. cave shouted ben. watch out! said  robyn.

 

 

2 thoughts on “To be able to predict the end of an adventure story by shay and sam

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    Sam and Shay
    I like some of your choices of words.
    Will you be using some of these when you write your own adventure story?
    Mrs Long

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